Duckling Star is about the day in the life of a young, female Security guard at a galactic water-park- The Duck Star. Debbie Hart, the star of the comic, is quite endearing with both a serious and goofy side. Through the course of a single issue she nabs some bad guys and learns a little about herself. Her costume/Character design is both the most ridiculous thing I have seen in a while and the coolest. The comics greatest strengths though, are the action sequences. All of the action is well thought out with great timing, and in general you can tell Daniel is in his element doing action scenes.

For criticisms I have two. There were a few hiccups in the story telling where it took too long for me to figure out what was going on. Some of this was sometimes not understanding a characters intentions because we the reader aren't given quite enough information. Secondly, and this relates to storytelling, is the unevenness of the art, sometimes the art doesn't have enough detail to make out at a glance what is going on. All that said I thought both of these were minor issues and something that can easily be ironed out in future issues, because the foundation is solid.

Overall I thought the set up and setting was unique and interesting with her being a guard at a galactic water park. Debbie Hart herself a great character, the side characters were original and fun too (I particularly liked the Olympic perv). There was a solid twist in the story and by the end a hero has been born. Well done!

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